Your art teacher is the coolest!

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"NOW TO DIGEST THE SOUL!"
-Samuel Coleridge

Agh I'm in school now... and this Apple is totally ass >.>

In other words... I can't see shit

I'll look at it tonight xD When I'm on my OWN PC

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I GOTZ DA BOUNCIEST BALLZ

Why comment if you can't see? It accomplishes nothing and makes no sense. Just don't do it. o_O

The past two comments seem to be a complete waste, no offense intended. C_c; Even I noticed it wasn't showing up this morning so I didn't bother to comment until this afternoon.

Extra points for you, you gave a very well defined pose for Stan~! He fits right into the background along with his dog. I'm glad you're making it more of a scene rather than an actual pose, flows together much better~ You made the hands look much better from your last piece to your sketchbook.

Only real tips I can give is to darken up the BG and throw in shadings to add on more feeling to the sketch rather than Stan and Sparky just there. I wouldn't have said anything for the BG, but I see faint lines and...yeah. o_O;

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~Kumori Saisei

Wow what a bitch jk.

I've seen it now, and it's my favourite one. XD Love how you did the mountains and Stan seems slightly Gothy, (Might just be the eyes) which gives it a slightly eerie feeling. Sparky is nicely drawn too

*Adds to favourites*

P.S I posted that because I was in school and hella bored, and I was frustrated that I couldn't see the picture. You know how I am Lior when I'm frustrated.

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I GOTZ DA BOUNCIEST BALLZ

Yeah, last night dA was screwing up and nobody's deviations would show. It was really annoying to see deviations get like 20 comments with people being like HURRRRR I CAN'T SEE HURRRRRRRR I'M GONNA FAV IT ANYWAY THOUGH 'CAUSE I'M SURE IT'S KAWAII HUUUUURRRRRRRR instead of just waiting for everything to be fixed.

ANYAWAY, as for the picture, I think it looks really great! This is definitely my favorite out of the batch so far :3 I really like the mountains and the field and just... it really has this 'open' feel to it. And plus that dog is just adorable.

The only thing I can really see wrong with it is that Stan's pose looks kind of... forced. His left leg is perfectly straight, and that itself is kind of hard to pull off, especially with his foot pointing downward like that. So my suggestion is to bend the leg slightly, and have the foot pointing up and a little to the side to give it a more natural look to it. In fact, here, I drew this: [link] It's the SHITTIEST DRAWING IN THE WORLD and I made the legs look like they were DANCING instead of SITTING but hopefully it should give you an idea on what the hell I'm talking about :B I forgot why I circled his left leg, though. Just ignore that. I don't know what I'm doing anymore. *single tear omg*

I THINK I'M STARTING TO SEE WHY PEOPLE GET ANNOYED WHEN I CRIT THEM

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I sings a song to make enames goto sleep.